OCTOBER 14, 2004 | | VOL 4, ISSUE 26 |
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When
ideas fail, words come in very handy - Goethe |
ISSN 1550-1787 |
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Note: this week's issue is all about words online. Words to use, words
to avoid, words that get business results online, words that can get you into
trouble. - DW Enter the book giveaway!
I asked a handful of A-list bloggers for their top "do" or "don't"
for writing an effective business blog. Their responses are intriguing - and useful.
Here's what Seth Godin, Halley Suitt,
Nick Usborne and others told me... Oh, but before you
click through, let me give you the biggest "don't." I found the following
tip on a blog that shall remain anonymous. It's breathtakingly wrong:
Don't do this
"To create a good
web blog just write out the thoughts that come into your mind and before you know
it you'll be blogging away to beat the band." |
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5 blog writing tips...
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Book
Giveaway + quick (fun) survey
I've been a
fan of Michael McLaughlin's Management
Consulting News for several years. It's an intelligent, substantive e-newsletter
on topics related to consulting (and there are lots of them). He publishes religiously
on or near the first of the month.
(Yes, he really is a consultant. He's
a partner with Deloitte.)
Now he's just released his first book, co-authored
with guerrilla marketing guru Jay Conrad Levinson: Guerrilla
Marketing for Consultants.
I've managed to get 3 copies to give away
to 3 lucky winners. From the book, here is a (partial) list of words to avoid when you're writing a proposal. Also useful to keep by your side when you're writing your home page copy or the About Us page on your site:
best-in-class
best-of-breed
bleeding edge
connectivity
cross-platform
cutting edge
empower
frictionless
granular
holistic
leading edge
mission critical
ramp up
scalable
thought-ware
value-added
win-win
world-class (fill in the blank)
Enter
the book giveaway + quick (fun) survey
2
most effective words to use in an email + what *not* to put in your e-newsletter
Don't
write this
A
"Publisher's Note" from a recent issue of an e-newsletter
I received said something to this effect:
Help! I'm in a rut. I want to know what types of articles
you are interested in. That's the hardest part of producing a newsletterĂ–
coming up with ideas of useful topics to write about.
Give me your topics, and
I'll gladly address them if I can. The easiest way
to reach me is by email <address provided>. After all,
this ezine is for you. You should get the information you most need. |
Big mistake Don't admit
to your readers that you're tired and running out of ideas, even if you are.
It is NOT the responsibility of your readers to write
your e-newsletter for you, nor to come up with topics or even specific article
ideas. Yes, your e-newsletter or ezine is for your readers.
But it's your job to be entertaining and to make it easy for your subscribers
to get at least one nugget of information from each issue. If you're
really out of ideas, then switch gears for an issue or two. Tip
to get feedback from your readers Run a survey quizzing your readers
on what challenges they're facing in their business that are relevant to the topic
of your e-newsletter. You can report back in the next issue with your
survey results (people just love stats... ) and you'll also know what
readers are most interested in. And the 2 most effective words...
to use in an email are: Download Now
Have you noticed? Readers want something instant (hence the "now"), easy and tangible. Email
is ephemeral. A PDF excerpt, mini report, top tips sheet, etc. has heft to it.
... interesting feedback from consultant & author Marcia Yudkin on my suggested 2 words:
She suggests using the phrase "Download today" in order to avoid triggering spam filters.
Marcia runs MarketingforMore.com and also publishes a terrific weekly ezine: Marketing Minute. (Sign up at the URL above.)
It's one of my must-reads. Short, text-only and almost always has a useful nugget.
After you prompt a response
But think like a marketer, please, before handing over your tips report to those who eagerly click through for the download..
If you're using those words in a text ad or email promotion, politely
ask subscribers for a bit more information (company name, Web site, phone number,
for example) before they get to your download page.
Warm regards, 
President/Publisher, WordBiz.com, Inc. direct:
+1 202.333.2022 debbie.weil@gmail.com or wordbiz@yahoo.com
P.S.
You've got 1 more day to take advantage of the introductory price on the PDF
version of the Business Blogging Starter
Kit. Use
this link to get 15% off. Offer exp*ires midnight EST Oct. 15, 2004.
www.BloggingStarterKit.com
Here's what one reader says about this
new report:
"Perfect timing. It's just the kind of resource
I was looking for." - Mike Gaynes, Quova.com
P.P.S. Call me if you want to leverage your online communication
strategy to generate increased business. That's what I do as a consultant.
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